Monday, March 30, 2009

NOTHING LIKE THIS

Baby...

There's a sizzling chemistry between us

Its crazy! ...
I think of every moment
We were together
I can feel the sensation in my body.
To have you swim in the flesh...

Oh, I'd die with pleasure...

But you have to promise
That you'll not walk
Away from me after that...
and leave me
Loving you and hating you
For loving me and leaving me..

9 comments:

Our Kid said...

Beautiful words

joyunspeakable said...

our Kid

gosh am so elated...thanks for being at mine

what can i offer you to drink?

Our Kid said...

More poetry. Its the dessert of life.

Shiko-Msa said...

Me too some more poetry plz. This is beautiful.

Screamer said...

New kid on the 'blog'

I just need to know, because I used to be into poetry a while back...

So, when you write, is it always about something you either saw, experienced, observed or felt, or do you somtimes make up a situation and write about it... like fiction?

Also, can you write poetry at any time so long as you have a pen and a paper or does it come to you as inspiration randomly. In other words, do poets also experience writer's block?

I used to write.

joyunspeakable said...

@our Kid & Shiko more poetry?

@Screamer...first many thanks...I've been writing small here and there....just that i've not been able to concetrate on it much....none published yet though...

to answer your question about pen and paper? anything can trigger a poem...poets block? I dont force it if its not there...yet experiences guide the way much...

gladys said...

I wish all guys would read this poem...

joyunspeakable said...

@gladys...welcome to my house....Joyunspeakable is a guy...

Rabin Ramah said...

Beautiful.